September 15, 2010
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Outcasts
Out on the land, living outlandish lives
It’s been a pleasure being an outcast with you
Outside and cast out of the main cast
Throughout the lands we’ve been castigated
And cast and crated, through and through
Outlined by the lines that lead us outside
But I’m fine as long as I’m out with you by my side
We ruled out following the rules, like true outlaws
For we’ll outlive these laws,
before we too see our way out.
So we cast our lines as the lives of outcasts
Hoping that as fools these fools we’d outlast
Until we meet the grave, and get out at last
Out of our minds, but heaving out the last laughs.
Comments (3)
God…i love the word play in this…so clever! Great job.
this is great, i love your wordplays
do you like slam-poetry cuz this reminds me of it
Yes, the wordplay and meter to this are great.